Saturday, January 29, 2011
A Response to Martone's "Flatness"
It is interesting that some of us as travelers aspire to see the background of a given area, not just brochures at a rest stop. However, we still take the route most travelled (interstate) and Martone illustrates, that the "interstate defeats our best intentions." The stereotypical flatness of the Midwest of America to travellers holds true to those seeing it from a modern road. It isn't until you travel deep into the heart of these states that as Martone points out, one might begin to see the flatness' "slight unevenness." Martone points out the significance of the Midwest's flatness in accordance with its geology and its necessity to ecosystems. This reading sparked something in my mind I would have never thought about, let alone write about. So I appreciate his thoughts on it. However, he goes through a whole spill of beautiful, visionary writing and then in the last paragraph says "Perhaps I make too much of geology, topography imprinting on our lives." To me, I think, that is the inspiration behind this text and that he second guesses. I don't know, I feel as though he didn't need to make a mention of questioning his motives for this particular writing. Although I do relate and understand his ideology. And I feel that topography does effect us in some way, even subconsciously.
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Andrea, I loved Martone's piece as well. I do think he needed to explain his motives for the piece and I think he did so by giving us some of the stereotypes non-mid-westerners cast about his beloved homeland. Gosh, I've even defended my native New Jersey from all those folks who have stereotyped it based on The Sopranos.
ReplyDeleteI recently was fortunate to visit Oklahoma. My friend who lived there seemed at first to be a bit apologetic about his state's flatness. He made a joke about the state tree, "the telephone pole" All joking aside, the telephone polls did seem to stick up intrusively, perhaps due to the barren, flat land surrounding them. Then, after a time in the car while we drove around, he pointed out variations in the landscape: an elm tree that was particularly full and healthy, slight elevations in the land, and even the pattern of the stark attenaes against the sky. This vignette points out, as Martone illustrated, how natives can truly know and deeply appreciate a landscape.